I hear the pitter pat
of the rain on my hat
and the hiss
as the drops
hit the grass.
My sodden jeans cling
like a rain-soakéd thing
to my legs
as I stride
down the path.
The dog rushes by
with a glint in his eye
as he startles
some birds
into flight.
There's a shriek of delight
from two girls at the sight
of the dog
dashing 'round
in the rain.
Water drips from his face
he's a total disgrace;
mud speckles
his body
in spots.
He chews on some wood
as only he could
stripping bark
from the branch,
then runs on.
Then later that day
in the usual way
the sun sets
and the night
gains domain.
We walk the silver path
that winds through the grass
as the clouds
pass the Moon
up on high.
The raindrops that fell
upon tin rooves, leave a smell
of eucalyptus,
fresh grass
and dank mud.
When the walk is complete
I dry the dog's feet
then sit down
to reflect
on the day.
The dog eats his food
then adds to my mood
by settling
down on
my lap.
Then we both make our way
at the end of our day
to our beds,
where we dream
of new walks.
~
Nice atmos Tony!
ReplyDeleteFine piece!
ReplyDeleteOne tiny item; "raindrops that fell" - I feel it should be "raindrops that fall". But that would break the rhyme, the fixing of which potentially introduces further complications that could detract from the effect.